Below I have pasted in the various versions of the script that we built for our presentation. This began with an idea, and with input from all members of our team it evolved into our final iteration.
Initial Draft
Sarah is going on a Shift retreat. She doesn’t really know why, she doesnt really know much about the whole thing. Apparently shift is something to do with sports.
Sarah doesn’t like sports. Well she does, but she doesn’t think she will be good enough. And they cost so much! And she doesn’t have time to organise it. And it’s so sweaty. So many roadblocks.
Kelsey is going to the shift retreat. She plays netball and does hiking and all sorts of other crap that is way too hard core. Sarah is only going because of Kelsey.
ShaaanXO is going to be there too, and Sarah might not have heard of Shift, but she has heard of her.
It costs 95 dollars to go, Kelseys parents paid for her to go, but Sarah’s parents made her pay for half which was so frustrating because she was saving up for heaps of really important things that she can’t think of right now.
Anyway, there she was, waiting in a mob with a hundred other girls to go to some forest thing in wainuiomata, she was not confident.
Oh my god busses. I hate busses. And I hate wainui. Why am I even going to this.
Ohh look a gift bag!! T-shirt… soap… bank leaflet lame… recipes… shift leaflet… Some lady is droning on and on and on about all these amazing things we are going to do this weekend. I’ll believe it when i see it. And I am not singing on this bus.
That night, Sarah tried yoga for the first time, She felt happy. She felt even happier after dinner that night.
Oh my god yoga is hard, all my muscles are aching!!! Waking up in this random hut didn’t help! I hope breakfast is good.
Breakfast was good. Sarah didn’t know this, but her presence here was paying for the running group that she was going to join next week. She didn’t know she was going to join the running group yet, either.
But back to today.
Do you guys know where the cross fit for noobs is?
Even Kelsey the super athlete looked shattered.
That insane lady from the cross-fit gym really went for it. I thought i was going to pass out at least three times.
I had heard of crossfit, but i never lingered on the videos in my facebook feed long enough for them to auto-play, they made me feel shitty about my weekend on the couch so i ignored them.
Ladies, here are your options for this afternoon!
Oh my god, sports or more sports.
Later that evening, one of the shift ladies came and sat next to her in the dinner room. Sarah asked
Why are you guys doing this? I mean it must cost a lot.
Sarah was right, it did cost a lot. The lady from ANZ who spoke to the girls earlier had talked to them about financial health, and how being on top of finances can reduce stress and make life a little easier. Sarah knew how sponsorship worked.
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Second Iteration
Meet friendly Fiona, a sixteen year old new to Wellington, and interested in making new
friends, getting involved in sport, and overcoming her shyness. In her first week at her new
school, she hears about a wellbeing retreat, Retreat Yourself, and looks into it further on facebook…
We will catch up with fiona in a minute, but first a quick overview of our vision for a sustainable shift:
Shift has already established itself in the Wellington region, encouraging
activeness and wellbeing in girls aged 12–20. Shift facilitates activities including
group runs, community activities and much more as you all know. However in order to be sustainable (without the funding of the Wellington City Council) something needs to happen so the girls can still engage in physical activity and well-being, while enabling Shift to continue growing – in the city, and nationally. We believe a wellness retreat based around Wellington can be a part of the solution, we have called this event, re-treat yourself. As well as being advertised in schools, This retreat will have a regional campaign, including Facebook marketing, and featuring in local magazines and newspapers.
Although she enjoys Sports, Fiona still feels too shy and embarrassed to take part in team
sports, so misses out on the physical activity she should be getting. She looks into the
retreat and sees that there is heaps to do, team building, talks from awesome people like
Shaaanxo and Eliza McCartney, and sports! It sounds like something she could be
interested in…
Like Fiona, many girls are dropping out of sports for things like:
• Feeling shy or embarrassed,
• It costs too much for them,
• Feeling as if they’re not good enough,
• Or just simply not interested.
What can we do to remove some of the barriers for not wanting to participate? Providing Somewhere girls can feel comfortable in their environment, willing to try new sports and be active, as well as socialising with each other?
Fiona has never heard of Shift before, but she knows that some of the girls at her school
are involved with it. This encourages Fiona to sign up to the retreat so that she can make
some friends in Wellington, and also at school.
Shift is doing great things for women and girls in Wellington, girls like fiona can benefit a great deal from the continued efforts of the wonderful shift team. However we believe a lack of Engagement is holding shift back from becoming a more sustainable social
enterprise. We see this issue of awareness and engagement as key to Shift’s
sustainable future, and raising awareness is the key to unlocking Shift’s potential for growth and impact.
For a 3 day, 2 night, all expenses paid retreat, Fiona’s parents are willing to pay $95 to go
to the retreat, so that she can connect with some of the girls in her new city, make new
friends, and get involved with the sports they know she loves.
Our team has identified that the highest objective we have for Shift is to help them
raise money while also helping their demographic. An event such as retreat yourself will
enable them to raise money, helping to sustain shift throughout the
remainder of the year. Our aim is to raise $10,000 from this event to contribute to
Shift’s sustainability. As the event will be fully sponsored, the money that the girls
pay to attend the retreat will go towards Shift and their movement and awareness in
Wellington City. Combined with the other sustainability ideas, Shift will have a
promising future.
Once Fiona arrives, she is greeted with a gift bag including a retreat t-shirt,
information about the speakers, and a Shift leaflet, things that she is interested in reading once she settles in. Looking at the timetable, she is looking forward to meeting
the new girls and learning more about her well being and all the activities that are to
Come!
*Aria explains timetable
The activities featured in the day plan of the retreat are the ones that girls
responded well to in our primary research, and that are known to be popular with
the current Shift community. Although the last conference Shift held was successful,
we believe that there can be a greater outreach to the girls, and more of an
emphasis on everyday wellbeing. This combined with exciting speakers and fun
activities, this retreat can turn into a yearly venture to spread throughout New
Zealand, and therefore becoming more sustainable.
With new friends made, a new found love for yoga, and inspiring life advice, Fiona is ready
to move through into the rest of the year, knowing that she has Shift to support her
throughout her teen years! She is definitely keen for another retreat next year!
Final Draft
Bullet points are to be written on slides.
Insecure Isabelle is a seventeen year old girl who is constantly bullied about her weight in high school. Although she enjoys sports and exercise, she is not comfortable in taking part in sport activities because of the hassle she gets from her peers. She heard about Shift from one of her classmates, but wanted to know more as it sounds like a great way to pick up some sports again, and meet new friends in a more inviting environment.
- Loves sport
- Doesn’t play due to insecurity
- Wants to meet new friends
Shift has already established itself in the Wellington region, encouraging activeness and wellbeing in girls aged 12–20. Shift facilitates activities including group runs, community activities and much more as you all know. However in order to be sustainable (without the funding of the Wellington City Council) something needs to happen so the girls can still engage in physical activity and well-being, while enabling Shift to continue growing – in the city, and nationally. We believe a wellness retreat based around Wellington can be a part of the solution, we have called this event, re-treat yourself.
- Shift is well established
- Demographic 12-20
- Needs to become sustainable
- Our solution!
Like Isabelle, many girls are dropping out of sports for things like:
• Feeling shy or embarrassed,
• It costs too much for them,
• Feeling as if they’re not good enough,
• Or just simply not interested.
(bullet pointed already)
What can we do to remove some of the barriers for not wanting to participate? Providing Somewhere girls can feel comfortable in their environment, willing to try new sports and be active, as well as socialising with each other?
Despite the bullying that Isabelle receives, she signs up for the Shift retreat that she has seen advertised around her high school. She sees that it is focusing on your mind, body and soul, and is super keen to become involved, and hear from some awesome people like Shannon Harris and Eliza McCartney!
- Isabelle signs up despite bullying
- Loves the whole ‘body, mind, soul’ approach
- Awesome speakers draw her interest
Shift is doing great things for women and girls in Wellington, girls like Isabelle can benefit a great deal from the continued efforts of the wonderful shift team. However we believe a lack of Engagement is holding shift back from becoming a more sustainable social
enterprise. We see this issue of awareness and engagement as key to Shift’s
sustainable future, and raising awareness is the key to unlocking Shift’s potential for growth and impact.
- A lack of engagement is holding Shift back
- Engagement and awareness are key to a sustainable future
For a 3 day, 2 night, all expenses paid retreat, Isabelle’s parents are willing to pay $100 to go to the retreat, so she can get more involved with the sports she loves, and make some new friends who will accept her and encourage her to try new things.
- Running over a weekend, all expenses paid (3 days, 2 nights)
- Parents willing to pay $100 (our primary research suggests this)
Our team has identified that the highest objective we have for Shift is to help them
raise money, whilst also helping their demographic. An event such as retreat yourself will enable them to raise money, helping to sustain shift throughout the
remainder of the year. Our aim is to raise $10,000 from this event to contribute to
Shift’s sustainability, this is based on 100 girls paying 100 dollars each to attend. In order for this event to make a profit, all costs must be fully met by sponsorship, which means the attendance fees paid by the girls contribute to the running of Shift for the rest of the year. This initiative, combined with the other sustainability ideas presented today, mean that Shift will have a promising future.
- Our aim is to raise money while encouraging engagement
- Retreat costs $100 to attend
- 100 girls each paying 100 dollars, equals $10 000 profit
- All running costs covered by sponsorship
Once Isabelle arrives, she is greeted with a gift bag including a retreat t-shirt,
information about the speakers, a Shift leaflet and the Empower-her magazine, things that she is interested in reading once she settles in. Looking at the timetable, she is looking forward to meeting the new girls and learning more about her well being and all the activities that are to Come!
- Greeted with gift bag (T-shirt, information, Empower-her magazine)
- Timetable creates excitement!
Some of the activities will include sessions with the guest speakers, team activities, sport classes, and just generally having a huge amount of fun! We prototyped one of the activities that we will hold, the amazing wellbeing race. Here, cabin teams will compete against one another and the clock to come out on top! Some of the stations include riddles, team exercises, yoga, and eating a whole bunch of food as fast as you can. We enjoyed running and participating in it a lot!
- (prototype video playing which will help with what to say)
The activities featured in the day plan of the retreat are the ones that girls
responded well to in our primary research, and that are known to be popular with
the current Shift community. Although the last conference Shift held was successful,
we believe that there can be a greater outreach to the girls, and more of an
emphasis on everyday wellbeing. This combined with exciting speakers and fun
activities, this retreat can turn into a yearly venture to spread throughout New
Zealand, and therefore becoming more sustainable.
- Included activities are based on research we undertook
- Speakers that appeal to our target audience
- Potential for expansion
With new friends made, a new found love for yoga, and inspiring life advice, Isabelle is ready to move through into the rest of the year, knowing that she has Shift to support her
Throughout the next steps in her life! She is definitely keen for another retreat next year!
- New found friends and love for Yoga
- Support from Shift
- Ready for next year’s retreat!